rate my poetry please!!!?

  • Thread starter Thread starter Baron V
  • Start date Start date
B

Baron V

Guest
The pain.
Let it bleed.
Cut my wrists,
Let the pain flow.
Like the river.
River of pain and darkness.
Sitting in a dark place.
My soul in pain.
Pondering.
But wait, now there's a light.
It's just my mom,
she turned my room's light on.
I hate her.
Soul. Pain. Darkness. Cold.
yeah this is serious, and i DO need to add a period to the end of every sentence. thats how you write correctly, idiot!
 
Back
Top