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Afraid

As I look into your eyes, you look away.
Standing up with tears streaming down you face.
You run out the door, helpless as I sit here.
Looking down at myself, and feeling weak.
Afraid to lose you. You're afraid to lose me,
and only love brought us together nothing else.
As I held you in my arms, my heart was more alive.
But the stuff we do isn't what makes me happy.
Its you and only you.
My rebuilt faith is my shining star.
I now look forth to you,
and hoping my last spent moment will be held in your soft hands.
I love you.
Hoping your never stop loving me.

The Lost Poet
 
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