I wrote these poems to my girlfriend and she likes them but I want someone else to like them also. Can you read this poem and rate it(0-5) please? (I know i'm a boy and its kinda weird for me to write them).
Poem #1
Nothing Without U
I love you so much,
You have a perfect touch,
I would die for you,
Cry for you,
To show how much I love you boo.
With you beautiful eyes,
As the sky,
I'm glad you chose me,
Out of all the other boys in the world,
im going to try my best,
to make you make perfect girl.
You have a cute smile,
So big and pretty,
If you smiled,
I could see it from miles,
I'm attraced to you,
so don't go away,
please be with me,
on this very day,
You are beautiful,
Yes its true,
Please understand,
i'm nothing without you.
I write my poems to express my feelings sometimes so can you please rate my poem from (0-5) and tell me why you rated it that. Thanks
Poem #1
Nothing Without U
I love you so much,
You have a perfect touch,
I would die for you,
Cry for you,
To show how much I love you boo.
With you beautiful eyes,
As the sky,
I'm glad you chose me,
Out of all the other boys in the world,
im going to try my best,
to make you make perfect girl.
You have a cute smile,
So big and pretty,
If you smiled,
I could see it from miles,
I'm attraced to you,
so don't go away,
please be with me,
on this very day,
You are beautiful,
Yes its true,
Please understand,
i'm nothing without you.
I write my poems to express my feelings sometimes so can you please rate my poem from (0-5) and tell me why you rated it that. Thanks