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Juventino

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It's a limerick by the way...

There once was a man whose name was Bill,
Who looked over his window sill,
Much to his dismay,
The last words he'd say
Was the sad truth that windows kill.

A limerick is a five lined poem with the rhyme scheme AABBA. The first, second and fifth lines have eight syllables, while the third and fourth lines have five syllables.

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