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My friends and I are starting a metalcore band and I wrote and song and I need other people's opinions. thanks 
We see the world as it is today, a wasteland full of terror that reeks of havoc and sin. With direness everywhere, surrounding us with faith that is no more. The devil wears many faces in this day in age. We are new to this world and have yet to learn how to accustom to it. The faces that are upon us now will haunt us for the rest of our lives. Oblivious of what is going on around us. I now realize and accept that this world has fallen into what was once known as impossible.
it will be better after we add breakdowns a stuff like that just rate it 0-10, 10 being the best and if you have any suggestions I would be happy to hear them, just be nice about it please
we're not trying to write dark evil lyrics it's just one song out of many. thanks
We see the world as it is today, a wasteland full of terror that reeks of havoc and sin. With direness everywhere, surrounding us with faith that is no more. The devil wears many faces in this day in age. We are new to this world and have yet to learn how to accustom to it. The faces that are upon us now will haunt us for the rest of our lives. Oblivious of what is going on around us. I now realize and accept that this world has fallen into what was once known as impossible.
it will be better after we add breakdowns a stuff like that just rate it 0-10, 10 being the best and if you have any suggestions I would be happy to hear them, just be nice about it please
we're not trying to write dark evil lyrics it's just one song out of many. thanks