Right Sock
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its understandable if you cant get the flow b/c some parts are dragged out and some are fast. but if you can, whaddya think? looking for constructive critisism thx.
paranoid i have no choice and my smile is void
my voice is hoarse, seems my heart's just another toy
i deploy false joy and ive got nothin to be scared about
but what goes around comes around, prolly soon im goin out
no doubt need to shout yell out this hurtin hatred within
pissed because i can, heartless b tch jus because i am
no chance for romance, hopeless to say the very least
on my knees beggin for a plea, please yea please save me
dont hate me just please love me and put no one above me
but something seems to tell me, im in store for nothing
well then f ck me f ck you, do what you gotta do
suit yourself lose myself to make you happy thats what ill do
we dont chose this life, bright red eyes in the night
sometimes i just wish someone would make me feel alright
cuz her bite, was just way worse than her bark was
but still her light, was more interesting than my dark was
paranoid i have no choice and my smile is void
my voice is hoarse, seems my heart's just another toy
i deploy false joy and ive got nothin to be scared about
but what goes around comes around, prolly soon im goin out
no doubt need to shout yell out this hurtin hatred within
pissed because i can, heartless b tch jus because i am
no chance for romance, hopeless to say the very least
on my knees beggin for a plea, please yea please save me
dont hate me just please love me and put no one above me
but something seems to tell me, im in store for nothing
well then f ck me f ck you, do what you gotta do
suit yourself lose myself to make you happy thats what ill do
we dont chose this life, bright red eyes in the night
sometimes i just wish someone would make me feel alright
cuz her bite, was just way worse than her bark was
but still her light, was more interesting than my dark was