rambling thoughts...comment on my song please?

aftrnoondelyte

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these words are inspired from a vivid dream i had the other night.

"sharpie tattoos"

Im a feeling without a shadow
Don’t shine light I swear im allergic
Try to create me a friend
And find failure’s the only option
I said, you said, they said
The sun is god among all
Like a titan, a vigilante deity
We decide, commit deicide
Are there cracks forming in my atoms?
My skin is leaking electricity
Fortune tellers foretold this light show
Doctors will stitch the fissures

Any moment we’ll tear down these walls?
Any moment these walls will close in on us?

A bridge that links my memories
Past, present, future leads
To sharpie tattoos connecting
The murals painted on my arms
I see your beauty laid out in henna
A visual woman such as yourself
Can paint my eyes in three dimensions
Deep blue in 2D…too deep in 3D
Music drives into my ears on the dance floor
Like a marionette my feet will alternate
Under the spin light
My life goes beat beat beat

Will we tear down these walls?
Will these walls close in on us?

Like the crowd I’m moving among
My courage is bought from behind a bar
It has a taste and a bite
Like a devil in disguise
I pray when I wake it’s still just a dream
That these sharpie tatts don’t fade away
Like the history I’ve left behind
But my dancing will pass the time
I’m short in change for a phone booth taxi call
Walking can be such a drag
But if it’s a full moon the man will fall
Down to home
And his decent is orchestrated by passing star lights

Tear down these walls
Don’t let them close in on us
just a little more info for you. lyrics aren't suppose to flow like a story or pertain along a specific subject line. its based on a dream i had that was full of randomness. i found little truths throughout the dream, hence the lines that jump around, like my dream did.
just a little more info for you. these lyrics aren't suppose to flow like a story or pertain along a specific subject line. its based on a dream i had that was full of randomness. i found little truths throughout the dream, hence the lines that jump around, like my dream did.
oops haha....
 
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