Ramadan, got time for a quick poem?

[Clock Cleaner]

You try to bring me down from all angles.

I duck slide and move.

People talk that talk.

I'm staying on my groove.

I took many a loss.

But I ain't stoppin hear.

I don't know what's comin next ,

but it aint poppin fear.

I know exactly what I want.

And I aint stoppin till I get it.

Like homie from "Blood Diamond", man.

If I ain't got it, I ain't quitin.

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The End

 

[ZeeZee]

It was pretty good, but just change some parts of it like the last three lines or so.