R&P + others: Opinions and suggestions for improvement of my new track?

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RJ mk. II

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I made a short song based off of the sounds of mowing a lawn (cus it's my chore, and I like recording everyday things and making noise out of it)
http://fudgecreeper.bandcamp.com/album/the-backyard-album

So, tell me whatcha think, and feel free to suggest any improvements.
@Brian: Actually, I've been thinking about reciting militaristic speeches over my more angrier sounding tracks (no political message; I just think it'd sound cool)
 
It's pretty good. I like it. It reminds me of storm. It's kinda scary. That's one other reason I like it. You can make it longer by adding some samples or some other sounds like this. Wind sound can be good. But you don't have to improve it though. This is a good track.
 
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