The Fool on the Hill
New member
ok, so I KNOW its not great, but heres my most recent poem, Hopefully someone gets something out of it ;-) thanks everyone!
I smell her foul breath,
See her empty eyes.
She just asked if I still love her,
Why do I find it so hard to answer?
I look down at this littered floor.
Unable to speak, I shake my head,
My answer is no.
I see those dull eyes, staring back at me,
And I see them fill with tears.
Unable to bare the anger I now feel,
I turn on my heel, and go to my room.
I fall on my bed and instantly taste the salty tears.
The next morning, I found her dead with a bottle on the floor.
BQ1: What did you think of my poem?
BQ2: Now playing?
BQ3: If you could be in one band, which band would it be and what instrument would you play?
BQ4: The most recent album you've bought?
I smell her foul breath,
See her empty eyes.
She just asked if I still love her,
Why do I find it so hard to answer?
I look down at this littered floor.
Unable to speak, I shake my head,
My answer is no.
I see those dull eyes, staring back at me,
And I see them fill with tears.
Unable to bare the anger I now feel,
I turn on my heel, and go to my room.
I fall on my bed and instantly taste the salty tears.
The next morning, I found her dead with a bottle on the floor.
BQ1: What did you think of my poem?
BQ2: Now playing?
BQ3: If you could be in one band, which band would it be and what instrument would you play?
BQ4: The most recent album you've bought?