question about poetry?

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wrestling.fan92

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okay so I need to add a syllable or two to this line can change the line completly aslong as it ends in pain and generaly means the same thing

Fighting through all the pain

the poem is about football (american) and/or rugby (similar games when it comes to the pain lol)
okay so it needs preferably to be 10 sylables
 
Right now, it is only 6 syllables.

This is 10, with correct stress:
"Constantly fighting throughout all the pain"
 
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