Prozac

thekatzman

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Prozac

The star I used to wish upon
Was faded from the start
And it'll take a supernova
To burn these memories from my heart

Lay alone by the fire, quivering in a box
Barely even pumping now deep beneath your lock

Even heartless still I know
That you are all I want
Who damned me, it's not quite clear
But it's you, not God I can't confront

Tightly gripped to innocence
That I no longer know
The entire world is laughing at me
Nowhere left that I can go

Clutching shreRAB of dignity
Refusing to let go
The scar you left lies under fabric
And it won't be long before it shows

Lay alone by the fire, quivering in a box
Barely even pumping now deep beneath your lock

This curse you left on me is waning
Escape is at my tongue
But I curse myself a thousand damnings
'Til no more breath lay in these lungs

You've taken all I've grown to know
Inside that solemn chest
And blackened all an onyx rain
I'm drowning in what you've possessed

Lay alone by the fire, quivering in a box
Barely even pumping now deep beneath your lock

The key you made will never open
Never open, never open
The key you made will never open
Never open it again
The key you made will never open
Never open, never open
The key you made will never open
Never open it again
 
hi Bud

I just happened to be browsing through the postings the other night when I came across your song, and I could relate to the expession you were trying to project, although it was burried really deep within your lyrics, or at least I think I know what you message is.

because I went through something similar a long, long time ago, thats why I know the saying "time is a great healer" is a load of crap! when you love someone who doesent love you, or know you exist, can be very traumatic in more than one way!

anyway back to the reason I'm getting in touch, I've actually rewriten your song in an R&B style type ballad, and I want to know if your up for a
co-write on this song, I don't want to post it untill its finished, so, I'll post one of my songs to give you an idea of the style it will be in before you decide, don't worry if your not interested, I'll just remove anything from the song that came from your lyric, and do another rewrite to call it my own, but as you drew me to this song of yours, its only fair I give you the opertunity to collaborate or agree a co-write, if you agree after viewing my lyric we can exchange emails for the sake of this collaboration even if its just the one! why miss an opertunity!

by the way I changed the title to 'INVISIBLE'. If your interested in a co-write mention it when you view my song lyric then we can get the ball rolling, it may take a month or two to hammer out something worthwhile so dont be impatient!

jonb 2.2.10
 
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