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can some1 proofread this for me its spoose to be a discriptive paragraph
There he was…………
There he was standing outside my window on a cold dark night, he looked identical to me be but with red blazing eyes like the sun. I went outside in the cold dark night not trying to wake up my parents and met him, he smelled like an angel from heaven, so sweet and extraordinary. I took him inside and gave him food but he would only eat the food I liked. When we went to sleep I told him about my background, when I told him I have AIDS he said “I know that you have AIDS and it is very sad, the villagers are avoiding you your friends are making discourteous comments about you, and there is a cure for it but only in my world”. I told my identical figure that the doctors told me there is no cure for it and I will die in a year. He says “there is one and only cure but only in my world, would you like to come, I told him I’ll think about it. The next morning he was gone and I looked for him and couldn’t find him, but that night there he was there standing outside my window on a cold dark night. I brought him inside and asked him where he was today, he said he was gone to his own world and he wouldn’t explain why. That night I slept with questions I couldn’t answer, like who is he, how does he know my past. Then next morning he asked me if I would like to go to his world to get a cure for my disease, he gave me one warning that I may never get to come back to earth, I decided to stay because I had hope that one day would get a cure for AIDS and life will be back to normal. That night he told me to meet up with him at the mountain and that he is leaving for good. I met up with him at the mountain and he stared hard at one place and extraordinarily a space ship appeared and he left
There he was…………
There he was standing outside my window on a cold dark night, he looked identical to me be but with red blazing eyes like the sun. I went outside in the cold dark night not trying to wake up my parents and met him, he smelled like an angel from heaven, so sweet and extraordinary. I took him inside and gave him food but he would only eat the food I liked. When we went to sleep I told him about my background, when I told him I have AIDS he said “I know that you have AIDS and it is very sad, the villagers are avoiding you your friends are making discourteous comments about you, and there is a cure for it but only in my world”. I told my identical figure that the doctors told me there is no cure for it and I will die in a year. He says “there is one and only cure but only in my world, would you like to come, I told him I’ll think about it. The next morning he was gone and I looked for him and couldn’t find him, but that night there he was there standing outside my window on a cold dark night. I brought him inside and asked him where he was today, he said he was gone to his own world and he wouldn’t explain why. That night I slept with questions I couldn’t answer, like who is he, how does he know my past. Then next morning he asked me if I would like to go to his world to get a cure for my disease, he gave me one warning that I may never get to come back to earth, I decided to stay because I had hope that one day would get a cure for AIDS and life will be back to normal. That night he told me to meet up with him at the mountain and that he is leaving for good. I met up with him at the mountain and he stared hard at one place and extraordinarily a space ship appeared and he left