Nonameshere
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I had to write an Imagery poem for english today, but I wasn't in school because of a field trip. Is the the right way to write an Imagery Poem? How can I improve it? Thanks in advance 
Remember just a few years ago, when you could
watch the spiraling, oak tree leaves fall and the
soft tug of the current in the mossy water?
Hearing the duck’s sunrise wake-up call
and the occasional ore hitting the water.
Never a motor. Rarely a yell.
Remember the breeze, the lanky seagrass
brushing against another, creating a symphony of tranquility.
The great egret perched proudly in the middle,
modeling its pure feathers to whoever watched
And the breathtaking blend of sherbet in the sky
Never a cloud, always a distraction.
Remember just a few years ago, when you could
watch the spiraling, oak tree leaves fall and the
soft tug of the current in the mossy water?
Hearing the duck’s sunrise wake-up call
and the occasional ore hitting the water.
Never a motor. Rarely a yell.
Remember the breeze, the lanky seagrass
brushing against another, creating a symphony of tranquility.
The great egret perched proudly in the middle,
modeling its pure feathers to whoever watched
And the breathtaking blend of sherbet in the sky
Never a cloud, always a distraction.