Poll: Would you please comment my latest poem please?

  • Thread starter Thread starter candicerockz
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Dec 25 Friday 2009
Fading:

Sunshine’s are fading
Through the mist of my tears
Happiness is not at long last mine
As I once thought it was
My heart is screaming screaming
To be free from this agonizing pain
That’s killing me from within
Don’t you see I need you now
More than ever
Don’t go please come back and
Save me from what I’ve become
My soul is crying screaming your name
Don’t want us to go our separate ways
You were my strength
My reason of living
Now I look deep down inside my core
And realize I never want to let you go
Darkness surrounding me
Memories that torment me are of you
Hold me in your arms and say I love you
And always will forevermore
Say to me one more time
That your love is only mine
Say to me that without you
My soul is incomplete
But I know it will never happen
Knife wounds across my wrists
And wrote on the mirror with my blood
I love you
Before darkness consumed me
 
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