POLL: please read my poem and give honest opinions only please.?

[GirlGoneInsane]

I hate you, I feel you
under my skin
like some kind of insect
I feel you within

so pin me with your words
and rip into me
im weak and afraid
and this you can see

Im a wide open target
with so much to hide
I stopped protecting myself
when all self love died

so humiliate me
make me feel like a tit
its alright I get it
im only worth $h!t

 

[Kurly]

Pretty depressing but i like it! It actually sounds like something i would write.

 

[Vampire freak]

I like it.

 

[Fatima_w]

That's a really ..let's say.. expressive poem and can be only written with real personal experience... I like it.BUT.. I wish there was more to it.. You have a good ending.. other than that..good job!

 

[Nadi]

well, it was fine until the last paragraph. now it's just $hit.

 

[jodo]

a bit depressing lol... i prefer happyer poems... sad poems have become a little cliche *shrug* =/

 

[Adam Lambert LOVE]

Honest Opinion: It $ucks.. =|

It's Honesty!

 

[Jen]

it sounds really emo i suppose!
And it sort of sounds like it's about being raped or something.
It is pretty well written though, i'm just not to crazy about the theme