poll:is this poem any good? (easy 2 points!)?

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i see in your eyes, soul, and heart that one fall day, you were ripped apart. like a leaf in the wind, or a horse bound by rope you don't know where your going and you loose so much hope. when you feel that way, just remember me, how happy your everything could cause me to be.the look in your eyes, and the charm in your word, gave me chills up my spine and wings like a bird. i see in your eyes, soul and heart, that someday soon we wont feel so apart.

thank you! sorry its not in a poem form, i just kinda wrote it in, thank you!
yours truly,
A.A
 
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