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Our system for how we vote for our president- the Electoral College, is a perfect example. This system makes our vote less valuable, because the representation of the states is completely disproportional, making a vote in a small populated state such as Wyoming as valuable as a vote in a remarkably bigger populated state like California. This can actually make it so the choice of president from the majority of the people does NOT win, and the choice that simply has smaller populated states’ votes does win just because of our completely unorganized way of voting.
Our system for how we vote for our president- the Electoral College, is a perfect example. This system makes our vote less valuable, because the representation of the states is completely disproportional, making a vote in a small populated state such as Wyoming as valuable as a vote in a remarkably bigger populated state like California. This can actually make it so the choice of president from the majority of the people does NOT win, and the choice that simply has smaller populated states’ votes does win just because of our completely unorganized way of voting.