Poets - When you were five, were you shy? Please rate my poem, thanks?

cassie58

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Seen But Not to be Heard

Recollecting polished rosewood
Some decades now slipped by
Silver hairpins grace the table
In a tangled heap they lie

Stiff hands reach out to find them
Blue-blotched and veined the skin
"Do you see where I've put them?"
Her voice strains, cracked and thin

Black dress both worn and crinkled
It's seen much better days
Her face much lined and wrinkled
Eyes blue but partly glazed

She shuffles and skirts bside me
Too young, in years am I
Not wise enough to comprehend
That sight can also die

Too shy by far to answer back
With hindsight, I suppose
To tell Great Granny that her pins
Were underneath her nose
 
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