Poetry: Sometimes, they deserve another chance :I?

[ᴇᴌᴉẍᴉᴙ]

Random Freestyle:
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The teardrops fall,
as I wipe my cheeks away.
The mind says forget;
The heart, stay.

You took my trust,
lost took it all.
You took my heart,
shattered and torn.

As we say goodbye,
I know it's not the end.
You still miss me;
I love you.

 

[Me : )]

Bitter sweet.

 

[Don]

Some times our scribbled thoughts deserve to remain unpublished...

 

[KK P]

Thats really good. I love how you used freestyle in this poem! It is absolutely wonderful!

 

[raquellie :]]

its sweet and sad. :]
i like how it doesn't really rhyme.

 

[Weirdo]

It is sweet, sad and true. Your style is good

 

[another px]

Be gentle with yourself, but stay strong. You can do this.

((squishes))

 

[another px]

Be gentle with yourself, but stay strong. You can do this.

((squishes))