Poetry Section:Rate my first ever poem?

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Cracko Kev

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It's about this girl who actually made me smile in over 5 years for the first time. I'm not good at this so here I go.


When I see her smile,A warm feeling hits my heart
It's contagious,after she smiles then I start
For years I lived alone,only showed cold emotions
Going through motions,letting the days pass me by
Imagine that,her smile kept me alive

I know it's not good but I'll keep trying until I'm really good at this.
 
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