I'm in a creative writing class and well poetry is not exactly my strong suit, just happens to be in the curriculum. Sooo could you read this and tell me what you think of it, any advice would be awesome. Thanks!
Final Draft
Tales of urban cultured artists.
City slickers coming in hot pursuit.
Laying claims
Painting Paris pathways--
Tagging on your heart.
Never bad,
Simply too much kiss bliss,
Cigarettes, and a slight lisp
Caused by
Fair weather and Patron
Forecasting future stormy conditions.
Overload in wide screen indie-films
Sharpen your intuition,
Open your eyes.
Tagging here, there, everywhere;
Constant spray paint rattling
Tighten your throat
Saying, “Boy, I can‘t figure you out.”
Walking away
New canvas clad
