poetry please comment, poetry please comment?

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Andrew Reed

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**walking b4 talking**
with this read
and never said
explain why
thinking guy,

whose habits we create
why we all do so many things alike
why we need 2 get a mate
is our nose really a spike?
 
truly i dont get it, what where you trying to express i can help u only if you tell me what you meant...
 
Well, I'm just wondering whether it is your intention to deliberately keep the reader out? Don't understand what you are getting at. Try again
 
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