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Im writing a poem and im stuck on one stanza.
Im writing a Interlocking Rubiyat; Iambic Pentameter.
Rhyme scheme is
aaba
bbcb
ccdc
dded <-- on this one currently
eefe
ffaf
So here's the stanza::
Why do you not get the message I convey?
I felt you existence yesterday,
[line i need help with]
Although i still look around in disarray. <- Not sure if im going to put that there.
Im writing a Interlocking Rubiyat; Iambic Pentameter.
Rhyme scheme is
aaba
bbcb
ccdc
dded <-- on this one currently
eefe
ffaf
So here's the stanza::
Why do you not get the message I convey?
I felt you existence yesterday,
[line i need help with]
Although i still look around in disarray. <- Not sure if im going to put that there.