Poetry Help!? I've written this poem but i need help with it!?

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julia s

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I have written this poem, but it needs more depth, could you yahoo-ers please help me out please!

From the heighest of heights, I fall
About to crash Like a crystal ball.
The clock is ticking, catch me soon
I flop in the air like a flat balloon
I look down, no safety net
I know now, my fate is set
Tears stream by me, I understabd, I now see
Its love of course, catch me quick before I'm frree!
 
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