poetry, haiku poem for english?

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do you think this is a good poem to turn into my english class for a poetry haiku contest thing?

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search for the freedom
abandon limitation
savor the independence.
 
ok haikus ar suppose to be about nature thats alll what a haiku is nature and 5,7,5 syllables im pretty sure so u can try again and actually make a haiku now that u no what it is : )
 
ok haikus ar suppose to be about nature thats alll what a haiku is nature and 5,7,5 syllables im pretty sure so u can try again and actually make a haiku now that u no what it is : )
 
How many syllables does it have to be. A Japanese Haiku has 17. 5-7-5, The word, the, is not good in Haiku's.

Searching for freedom (5 syllables)
abandon limitation (7)

you figure out how to make the third line with five syllables
 
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