poetry. do you think its good?

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I thought today was a very good day
I did everything to make it all go away
Suddenly fell and you didn’t sway
That’s when I knew we would never last this way.

*Suddenly TEARS fell
if you disagree, could you help a little? im only 16 and very new at writting this. thanks
does poetry have to rhyme at the end?
 
That was good! I liked it. You can write poems better then i can. Keep on writing! And dont let the haters dis your poems alright? ignore them they have no f--ing clue what they are talking about
 
its good keep writing .... tell us more it leaves me like i want to know more!
 
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