Poem, what do you think?

[C.lo.D]

I want to kill myself now
right now this minute
i want to die this second
then they will notice it

I want to but i can't
what will that achieve
Instead i shall starve
then they needn't berieve

not that they would any way
they simply do not care
i hate them with a vengence
they hate me back to be fair

if i died this second
nobody would mind
remember i'm invisible
or all of them are blind

but thinking through my tears
i remember all my plans
to have a family
and be famous with fans

i suppose if i go on living
then maybe they will see
what a wonderfull person they ignored
and then they'll say sorry to me

of course i shall accept it
it's not there fault it's mine
if i was born invisible
we can't help that i suppose it's fine