Poem Opinion.... What do you think?

[Prissy G]

My Life will end soon along with this story I wrote for you.

You know you’ve hurt me
You know you’ve provoked me
You said you would be With Me and you lied to me
I ended with the last laugh
You ended with The Mask of The past
You left me on the floor to cry by my self so I’m leaving you to die with some one else.

You never loved me u never cared it was only lies floating in the air
Lies just to scare

You broke my heart
And Tore it part,

I hate You
I hate Everything about you
But I Can’t be without you

Its all true to you.
Can’t you see my feelings are just so blue

Its true that the sun cant go up without the moon

Its true that soon I cant live without you.

My Life will end soon along with this story I wrote for you.
To my first answer- Really!? What songs?

 

[Flute ninja]

That is an awesome poem kudos to you:}

 

[tunafish]

Some of the lines seem too inspired by some certain songs. Other than that, not bad