and to adhere to policy of making it a question....Would you critique it for me?
#3
Birth. Death.
All else is essentially irrelevant,
as seen in a realists eyes.
Everything in between
the two five letter words:
Hope
Love
Needs
Courage
Despair
Intrigue
are none-the-less
Lost
Simply forgotten;
A grain of salt washed
ashore with a tidal wave,
Gone.
To discover meaning, and live for simply that.
To think beyond and change the future,
a hope can live on,
but only without a name, a face, or
possibly recognition.
How selfless can one be,
to know that between those two little words,
lies a moment of responsibility,
a moment of misfortune,
and a moment to be forgotten.
Jonathon Walters (c) 2009
#3
Birth. Death.
All else is essentially irrelevant,
as seen in a realists eyes.
Everything in between
the two five letter words:
Hope
Love
Needs
Courage
Despair
Intrigue
are none-the-less
Lost
Simply forgotten;
A grain of salt washed
ashore with a tidal wave,
Gone.
To discover meaning, and live for simply that.
To think beyond and change the future,
a hope can live on,
but only without a name, a face, or
possibly recognition.
How selfless can one be,
to know that between those two little words,
lies a moment of responsibility,
a moment of misfortune,
and a moment to be forgotten.
Jonathon Walters (c) 2009