Poem I just wrote. Called cliff diving. Give Feedback please? ?

Beth Holland

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Cliff diving

The water was not calm
Nor was it roaring
It had a strong tide
Strong enough to send you swirling

We didn't care
As we stood on the edge of a 50ft cliff
Watching the water smack into the buldging rocks
We aim to jump far
With one last look*
We took each others hands
Shut our eyes*
And took a leap of faith
Just me and him

Next thing we knew
We were spining in the air
The fall was fast*
Letting out a loud scream

Falling into the water together
Still hand in hand
We raised above the water
Lettin out laughter*
It was the greatest thing
 
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