poem for school (please critique) :greek mythology?

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does it make sense and can you see what character i am talking about?

I fill the air with Balm of Life,
Irresistable is my liquid song,
My lips cradle the enticing sound.
Captive of mine,
Forever you will be.
Closer you come to my voice
Farther from life you become.
Goddess I am not,
yet gifted I am.
Punished to stay as
Half-human, half-bird.
By the hand of Demeter
Our bodies are trapped.
Daughters of Terpsichore
And Achelous, let us sing you
To sleep.
 
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