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I don't mind any criticism.
did anyone see that?
what she did last night?
her face was red,
her eyes were red,
her arms; red.
everywhere is red.
stained in red.
she didn't know;
she was rash, she wanted to escape.
she wanted to feel alive.
she wanted to have a purpose.
she wanted to live.
arms shaking; she tried to stop it,
her mind denying it.
she can't get through,
time stops, but the red doesn't.
it stays, it thickens.
she finally hoped; to see the next day.
to protect her future.
did you see what she did?
i hope you did.
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Next poem, unrelated.
come play, come see.
all the distortion of our reality.
can you hear those cries?
it's ourselves, yelling at the mirror.
it's a freak show., that parents love to see,
its the show, where everyone is,.
that girl cries; makeup removed.
the guy grovels at the ground.
we aren't moving, as we're stuck
in our shadows, our fake dreams.
i'm the devil that shows you life,
we've lost our hearts here.
the distortion, can you see it?
I don't mind any criticism.
did anyone see that?
what she did last night?
her face was red,
her eyes were red,
her arms; red.
everywhere is red.
stained in red.
she didn't know;
she was rash, she wanted to escape.
she wanted to feel alive.
she wanted to have a purpose.
she wanted to live.
arms shaking; she tried to stop it,
her mind denying it.
she can't get through,
time stops, but the red doesn't.
it stays, it thickens.
she finally hoped; to see the next day.
to protect her future.
did you see what she did?
i hope you did.
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Next poem, unrelated.
come play, come see.
all the distortion of our reality.
can you hear those cries?
it's ourselves, yelling at the mirror.
it's a freak show., that parents love to see,
its the show, where everyone is,.
that girl cries; makeup removed.
the guy grovels at the ground.
we aren't moving, as we're stuck
in our shadows, our fake dreams.
i'm the devil that shows you life,
we've lost our hearts here.
the distortion, can you see it?