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The Storm

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angels play harps
heavens call
sheltering demonic tarps
haunted ills crawl
red finger distain
ideal blender backfire
whirling a pureed brain
mission accomplished, admire
frost-nipped tested peace
close to lullaby, till set adrenaline
kicked mystery leased
no sin genuine
up close eye inspection
shuffle the ads
commercialism savior
sugar treats to fad
coasting on behavior
 
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