Plz comment on my poem?

Obedience to a comprehended law
is freedom, peace of mind and power.
Creation moves in submission timelessly.
Unyielding men are broken by hours.

And look, the liberation! The poise
of being one with God, the precious
quietude of blood, the aftermath of
bold acceptance.

Intimation of some final good
comes in surrender; waiting instead
of seeking, wanting nothing, being nothing.
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