please tell me what you think of this poem i wrote it last night.?

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Don't worry about me I,m fine.
I'm just hurt coz your not mine.
I can't stand the thought of you being someone else's other half.
To love her,hold her and make her laugh.
All day I think of you and can't help but do.
And your the thing that keeps me up all night.
Even when I know that's not right.
How can I put it behind me When your all I see
And in you arms is the only place I wanna be.
I know it's true
because my hearts tells me your the one for me.
And I can't help but believe we're meant to be.
They say I have to But how can I move on ?.
It's almost impossible your all I've ever known.
I can't even if I wanted to.
I know it's in vein But I will always love you.
But there's nothing to do When circumstances oppose
Even though your the one I love the most.
I'm not gonna move on.
I'm not gonna hide my feelings & burry my thoughts
When all I wanna do is to be with you.
I'm not crying.
I just have a secret smile :(

okay my grammar is not the best and i dont write poems i just wrote this one because the person its to writes poems so they would understand it more.
 
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