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Dear Office of Student Financial Aid,
My name is ________ and I would like to thank you for taking the time to review my financial aid suspension appeal. First and foremost continuing my education is a high priority for me and I’m sure after reading this you will see that the conditions that allowed me to reach the 150% maximum credit rule were really not by my choice.
Between the years of 2003-2007 I served in the United States Air Force and worked as an Aerospace Maintenance Technician. Upon reviewing my transcript I realized that the Community College of the Air Force shows that I attempted 55 credit hours. Every one of those 55 hours were not taken voluntarily but were instead required for my job in the military. All of these courses were necessary to ensure that the Air Force was always deployment ready and that each of us serving in the military were highly skilled technicians. If my required military training were not included in this rule then I would fall well below the 150% maximum credit rule.
Between the years of 1998-2000 I attended the University of _________ and my grades were very poor. I have a few D’s, F’s and W’s and I realize that I have to live with those grades and take full responsibility for them. I stopped attending U of _ and had a cumulative GPA of 1.88 and since then I have worked hard to increase that GPA as much as possible. I started attending ____ after leaving the military in 2007 and earned 36 credits there with a GPA of 3.87. I then transferred to ___ and hold a GPA of 3.25 after 3 semesters here. My academic performance has drastically improved since I first attended school 10 years ago and I’m proud to say that I have pulled up to a cumulative 2.86 GPA but I still have more to prove as my final goal for graduation is to have a 3.0.
Thank you for your consideration on my appeal and if any other information is necessary please don’t hesitate to contact me.
I have omitted personal details from the essay but please tell me if anything should be changed and what my chances for approval would be
My name is ________ and I would like to thank you for taking the time to review my financial aid suspension appeal. First and foremost continuing my education is a high priority for me and I’m sure after reading this you will see that the conditions that allowed me to reach the 150% maximum credit rule were really not by my choice.
Between the years of 2003-2007 I served in the United States Air Force and worked as an Aerospace Maintenance Technician. Upon reviewing my transcript I realized that the Community College of the Air Force shows that I attempted 55 credit hours. Every one of those 55 hours were not taken voluntarily but were instead required for my job in the military. All of these courses were necessary to ensure that the Air Force was always deployment ready and that each of us serving in the military were highly skilled technicians. If my required military training were not included in this rule then I would fall well below the 150% maximum credit rule.
Between the years of 1998-2000 I attended the University of _________ and my grades were very poor. I have a few D’s, F’s and W’s and I realize that I have to live with those grades and take full responsibility for them. I stopped attending U of _ and had a cumulative GPA of 1.88 and since then I have worked hard to increase that GPA as much as possible. I started attending ____ after leaving the military in 2007 and earned 36 credits there with a GPA of 3.87. I then transferred to ___ and hold a GPA of 3.25 after 3 semesters here. My academic performance has drastically improved since I first attended school 10 years ago and I’m proud to say that I have pulled up to a cumulative 2.86 GPA but I still have more to prove as my final goal for graduation is to have a 3.0.
Thank you for your consideration on my appeal and if any other information is necessary please don’t hesitate to contact me.
I have omitted personal details from the essay but please tell me if anything should be changed and what my chances for approval would be