Please read this poem and give opinions?

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~ A.R. ~

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I wrote it fast -- in about 2 minutes, so it may not be very good, but I would like an outside opinion. Please be nice :)


How could I have been so stupid?
Someone has been lying..
played me like a fool.
What was I thinking?
So soon, too soon..

Trust.
It takes years to build up, and only seconds to destroy it.
You did it - I know.
And now
I am letting you go

Yes it hurts
of course
And I will always love you
But we are through

Seek not my heart,
For… it no longer yours
 
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