please read my poetry and critique!?

[Luna Lovegood]

A BOOK OF EMPTY PAGES

a book of empty pages is no book at all you may think, but to me it's a world of possibility.
words float down from above, letters fill my sight, and together we shall write.
write a story everyone shall read, one to bring tears to the eyes, or perhaps bring joy to little children.
but either way a book of empty pages is a book of possibility.

 

[tiny armidilo]

very nicely done. short and sweet, interesting great, makes you think. i have read a lot of peoples poems on this site and a lot of them i have gave negative, check your self if you want,

so this is truly your idea, it is very nice, believe me i can be very simon cowell like this was actually very good

 

[hoestessbaby777]

Flows nice, but I am unclear of the message you are sending through it. Maybe in the first stanza you should put the main idea because its a little confusing.

 

[lakelover]

I like it and what it says. I might change words float... to letters float down creating words that fill my sight.