Please read my poem and tell me what you think? Very detailed poem.?

[sksllover]

Water descending down my cheek.
my vision fading to a blur.
my state of mind becoming weak.
cant stop thinking of her.
many precious memories.
simultaneously running through my mind,
like our whole relationship is on rewind.
All the emotions are released in one big explosion
and then become absent
detaching from your soul,
body becomes lifeless
craving replenishment
of the emotions it drained,
into an imaginary sealed hole.