tell me what you think of when you read my poem and best answer gets 10pts!!!
i rise, eyes open
to a fluttering light.
i can not seem to make out its shape
because it is so bright.
and then i see it
come to an end.
dancing about,
playing pretend.
i wish i could stay,
and live with it.
but i have to go,
into the pit
and even though
it is not of despair or even grief,
but of happiness;
it isn't brief.
don't be sad,
but please would you care.
i don't know what will happen
when i get there.
but please, tell me,
when i am gone.
when i close my eyes,
and i lose my brawn.
and when you join me
in the land of the peace full,
i will be waiting for you there.
i rise, eyes open
to a fluttering light.
i can not seem to make out its shape
because it is so bright.
and then i see it
come to an end.
dancing about,
playing pretend.
i wish i could stay,
and live with it.
but i have to go,
into the pit
and even though
it is not of despair or even grief,
but of happiness;
it isn't brief.
don't be sad,
but please would you care.
i don't know what will happen
when i get there.
but please, tell me,
when i am gone.
when i close my eyes,
and i lose my brawn.
and when you join me
in the land of the peace full,
i will be waiting for you there.