Please read my book!?

[Kat]

Please comment on the page and on here. I really want constructive criticism, and what to do next. http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=2275

Thanks in advance!

 

[celia]

just a put in some more detail . you got a great story going on though keep working !

 

[♥(=☮]

Uhm, got to the conflict waaaaaay to quickly.It was that good. Doesnt make sense.Theyre poor but still can spend money? REvise most definatly

 

[Ana <3]

It's all right, but your first paragraph doesn't really grab me. You should have a chapter before that, much like a prologue, maybe that tells a bit about how the necklace gained its' powers or something.