Please rate my poetry and give your comments and suggestions.?

" Opportunity Lost "

A dream expressed
Which never did come true
And I sat back
And watched it move

I could have had a grip
But I let it go
And now I regret
What I let go

When opportunities come
Grasp it tightly
So that you don’t regret later
The chance you lost

Sometime’s life’s bitter
Sometime’s life’s sweet
But life is really what
We make it be!
 
Dont really like it.. cuz i know it can be better if i write it =P anyway guess its okay!
 
I think its so beautiful and relates to me lol!!!!
Great job! i wish i could write poety!
 
I think its so beautiful and relates to me lol!!!!
Great job! i wish i could write poety!
 
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