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I want to get an A+ on this and i want it perfect. Please correct this and its talking about my important life essay. Are there any changes or mistake i should fix? i am in middle school and 13 by the way. Its about my important life.
Whether my adventures take me two miles down the road or across the world I will be happy, as long as I am experiencing new things. For me, life is about experiencing as much as I can while I can. Each day is filled with countless opportunities to do so many things. Each day you have the opportunity to meet new people, make a difference in someone’s life, or simply try a new food. I love taking advantage of as many of these opportunities as I can and each day is an adventure. I have a passion for animals and experiencing different wild animals. I want to be more than an animal lover; I want to experience how other animals live. I want to live a day in their shoes. While studying at California State University. I plan on studying abroad, to achieve some of my traveling desires. After I have received my Bachelor of Science in zoology, I plan on going into the Peace Corps for 1 year. Then I plan on returning to UC San Diego to get my master’s in Zoology. Then I’ll have the opportunity to be more educated about different animals.
In summary, discovering new things is what drives my passion for adventure and traveling. I love to discover and learn about a wide variety of things. As a little kid I was always asking questions and trying to learn as much as I could. No matter where my travels take me I am always going to be learning new and exciting things. I learned to never give up your dream and be successful in life.
Is the conclusion Perfect. Are there any changes or mistake i should fix?
Whether my adventures take me two miles down the road or across the world I will be happy, as long as I am experiencing new things. For me, life is about experiencing as much as I can while I can. Each day is filled with countless opportunities to do so many things. Each day you have the opportunity to meet new people, make a difference in someone’s life, or simply try a new food. I love taking advantage of as many of these opportunities as I can and each day is an adventure. I have a passion for animals and experiencing different wild animals. I want to be more than an animal lover; I want to experience how other animals live. I want to live a day in their shoes. While studying at California State University. I plan on studying abroad, to achieve some of my traveling desires. After I have received my Bachelor of Science in zoology, I plan on going into the Peace Corps for 1 year. Then I plan on returning to UC San Diego to get my master’s in Zoology. Then I’ll have the opportunity to be more educated about different animals.
In summary, discovering new things is what drives my passion for adventure and traveling. I love to discover and learn about a wide variety of things. As a little kid I was always asking questions and trying to learn as much as I could. No matter where my travels take me I am always going to be learning new and exciting things. I learned to never give up your dream and be successful in life.
Is the conclusion Perfect. Are there any changes or mistake i should fix?