okay so im doing an essay on comparing two people.
so i did me and my best friend.
this is what i got on my own (without gramatical errors cus i dont wanna type up the commas and stuff. )
some best friens are so close that they'e like sister , thats the case between my best frind and i, ___________.
i met ___ one year ago and we've been best friends ever scince, but we do have our differences and similarities: we both have decent grades and we're both thirteen but i listen tolatin music and she listens to rock, but i personally think the lyrical conten of that genre in general is melodramatic and redundant. she is a blonde - headed ussian , and im a brown headed italian.
all in all shes my best friend and i love her in every way.
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yah.
thats what i got. will you help me with my conclusion.. i dont think its very strong.
and maybe some 'big sentenes' like when i said "i listen to latin music and she listens to rock but i personally htink the lyrical content of the genre is general is melodramatic and redundant. "
can you think of any other 'big sentences' like that to go in my essay?
pleasee help!
so i did me and my best friend.
this is what i got on my own (without gramatical errors cus i dont wanna type up the commas and stuff. )
some best friens are so close that they'e like sister , thats the case between my best frind and i, ___________.
i met ___ one year ago and we've been best friends ever scince, but we do have our differences and similarities: we both have decent grades and we're both thirteen but i listen tolatin music and she listens to rock, but i personally think the lyrical conten of that genre in general is melodramatic and redundant. she is a blonde - headed ussian , and im a brown headed italian.
all in all shes my best friend and i love her in every way.
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yah.
thats what i got. will you help me with my conclusion.. i dont think its very strong.
and maybe some 'big sentenes' like when i said "i listen to latin music and she listens to rock but i personally htink the lyrical content of the genre is general is melodramatic and redundant. "
can you think of any other 'big sentences' like that to go in my essay?
pleasee help!