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The construction of better roads further increased travel throughout the nation, and stimulated the rise of businesses that offered food, service and shelter for travelers while on the road. Restaurants and diners therefore began to appear, which provided food for hungry travelers and exposed them to different foods and custom dishes. Motels also emerged and provided hospitality for tired travelers. Better competition among motels arose as more and more emerged. Service was also a tremendous asset produced by highways, as gas stations popped out of every corner at every intersection and served as quick fuel stops. Together, motels, restaurants, and gas stations produced thousands of new jobs for Americans.
 
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