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i wrote this poem to this girl i like, its her her birthday gift. it sucks and that's why i need your help. i'm a bad poetry writer. comment on what i wrote, fix it to the way you see proper please, and if your very nice add some more things.
Diana, the bright,shining, beautiful flower
When your next to me, you give me great power
i will travel around the world, more than a Billion mile.
just so i can see you and that lovely smile.
your heart so pure,(wa kteer 7anone)
best looking girl I've ever seen, (7ata ta2beenet skhone)
Disregard the word inside the brackets.
I'm all of of thoughts so if you can add anything please do
thank you
Diana, the bright,shining, beautiful flower
When your next to me, you give me great power
i will travel around the world, more than a Billion mile.
just so i can see you and that lovely smile.
your heart so pure,(wa kteer 7anone)
best looking girl I've ever seen, (7ata ta2beenet skhone)
Disregard the word inside the brackets.
I'm all of of thoughts so if you can add anything please do
thank you