MemoryMotel
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Its third person, please notify me if anything is out of third person. Please help me come up with better conclusion
my topic: the world today is obsessed with celebrities. Why?
Society is obsessed with celebrities. For what reason? Perhaps it's because people try to compensate their dull lives with an idol that they wish to become in the long run. It's understandable to adore a certain celebrity, but they are human - just like us. There are many reasons why people seem to be so obsess with celebrities.*
People love those underdog nobodies to riches, college drop-outs who felt whatever line of business they were set up for was not their true calling, laying it all down on the line to pursue something even bigger. Obviously people love knowing this stuff because majority of them are rather dissatisfied with their own careers, and look elsewhere for that inspiration for change. Let's not forget that celebrities are entertainers. People love to watch them - that is why they are celebrities in the first place. In blockbuster movies that are done brilliantly, people get a sense of feeling that they know the character personally due to powerful acting and a scripts.
But this doesn't explain the obsession people have for them. Many of them become obsessed with the actor's/actress' looks rather then his/her talent. Let's take for example the vampire movie “Twilight." *Some people only focus on the actors'/actresses' looks instead of enjoying the movie. Sometimes, the role of the good looking sweet heart or hero makes people fall head over heels for them. The audience follow them like sheep, trying to imitate what they do and wear,
People are obsessed with their lifestyle because of the wealth, the clothes, the flashing lights, the fancy cars and the attention. Who is to blame for this celebrity obsession? The tabloid obsessed culture(media) take pictures and airbrush them to be perfect and the real person pictured does not look anything like that. Society never sees the real person so we get a false impression.*
(Conclusion)
It's okay to look up to celebrity and find inspiration from them and like them for what they do but with so many things going on in the world today like the war in Iraq and Global Warming, we focus on other matters and instead of worshipping celebrities and . Instead of buying magazine on celebrity gossip, give the money to someone that needs it more then anything.
Its third person, please notify me if anything is out of third person. Please help me come up with better conclusion
my topic: the world today is obsessed with celebrities. Why?
Society is obsessed with celebrities. For what reason? Perhaps it's because people try to compensate their dull lives with an idol that they wish to become in the long run. It's understandable to adore a certain celebrity, but they are human - just like us. There are many reasons why people seem to be so obsess with celebrities.*
People love those underdog nobodies to riches, college drop-outs who felt whatever line of business they were set up for was not their true calling, laying it all down on the line to pursue something even bigger. Obviously people love knowing this stuff because majority of them are rather dissatisfied with their own careers, and look elsewhere for that inspiration for change. Let's not forget that celebrities are entertainers. People love to watch them - that is why they are celebrities in the first place. In blockbuster movies that are done brilliantly, people get a sense of feeling that they know the character personally due to powerful acting and a scripts.
But this doesn't explain the obsession people have for them. Many of them become obsessed with the actor's/actress' looks rather then his/her talent. Let's take for example the vampire movie “Twilight." *Some people only focus on the actors'/actresses' looks instead of enjoying the movie. Sometimes, the role of the good looking sweet heart or hero makes people fall head over heels for them. The audience follow them like sheep, trying to imitate what they do and wear,
People are obsessed with their lifestyle because of the wealth, the clothes, the flashing lights, the fancy cars and the attention. Who is to blame for this celebrity obsession? The tabloid obsessed culture(media) take pictures and airbrush them to be perfect and the real person pictured does not look anything like that. Society never sees the real person so we get a false impression.*
(Conclusion)
It's okay to look up to celebrity and find inspiration from them and like them for what they do but with so many things going on in the world today like the war in Iraq and Global Warming, we focus on other matters and instead of worshipping celebrities and . Instead of buying magazine on celebrity gossip, give the money to someone that needs it more then anything.