Please Help !! Any Advice for this Cover Letter?

I_Bun_Zoots

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Any help, criticism, observations, is welcomed and appreciated. I also wondering on the ordering of sentences or choice of word . Please bear in mind this is just a rough draft.......... Thanks again


I have always had a strong interest in consumer electronic goods, and using them has come almost second nature.

Over the years as advances and improvements in technology have been increasing, I have come to realize that the technological industry is something i would like to become a apart of.

I have a number of Apple products, which I use on a regular basis, so I have developed a good understanding and familiarity with the products

Apple Inc is at the forefront of the technological industry, producing innovative goods and offering excellent (the best) customer service, i would hope to contribute to the world of Apple as a specialist.

At apple stores i understand there is an amazing passion for it's products, a passion i share.

I believe i have the right people skills to become an apple specialist

I look forward to an opportunity working for apple. If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to ask.
 
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