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Kiddy Thinks An Analysis Essay

Alison Gopnik’s “kiddy thinks” first appeared in “guardian weekly” and adapted from a chapter in “the science in the crib” In this essay Gopnik aspires to convince her readers with evidence from experience and help from other psychologist, that babies use scientific theories to aid in the process of their intellectual development. “very young children have the same strategies as scientists.” She suggests that babies are a lot like adults in that they are capable of thoughts and feelings.

The main point made in Alison Gopnik’s essay is a persuasion that babies are born with extraordinary minds and learning abilities which are exercised by using scientific systems and help from other individuals. She arranges her studies in stages through an age timeline as following; Newborn babies can recognize emotions of humans and understand that an adult’s face is like their own; 9 month olds they start to understand emotions and can tell the difference between them. By the time they reach one they realize that people might think and feel differently than they do. At two years old they try to test their learning’s and love to play games like hide and seek but don’t understand the concept of hiding.


Gopnik’s purpose of the reading “kiddy thinks” is to inform the audience that from birth babies have the capability to learn and develop cognitive skills. Her tone at the beginning changes from friendly and humorous to serious and informative. Primarily the essay is organized though comparison and contrast. She contrasts how children use a scientific approach to learn cognitive skills. “They think, observe, formulate theories, make predictions, and do experiments.” Through this she also demonstrates the importance of contact with other individuals to influence learning. She compares these main ideas to the developmental process through stages of different ages. Gopnik uses scientific evidence from her own studies as a developmental psychologist as well as from fellow psychologist to back up her personal research and to convince the reader that babies are emotionally developed and extreamly sophisticated learners

Gopnik introduces her main idea through narration of her own child’s experience and the discovery that people have different feelings, thoughts and opinions. Effectively this lays out the base for her thesis on how children are not just blank slates but intellectual human beings from the time of birth. Gopnik concludes her essay by using irony that child care is so important although she says, we punish the parents who take maternity leave or time off from their job to be with their children. This persuades the reader in a biased and opinionated way to support “flexible work hours and funding for high quality daycare”
 
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